week9

In this update, I focused on several key adjustments to improve the overall presentation and emotional depth of the animation.

  • Reworked the seated animation to achieve a more natural posture and smoother motion.

  • Remade the early conversation sequence, refining timing and gestures to enhance interaction and narrative flow.

  • Adjusted lighting based on different times of day to create a more coherent sense of time progression.

  • Unified overall color tone for visual consistency across scenes.

  • Added more facial expressions to better convey subtle emotions.

  • Tweaked the movement frequency of plants for a more natural rhythm.

  • Refined facial texture maps to improve realism and surface detail.

  • Adjusted the final shot composition for a stronger emotional ending.

  • Fine-tuned filters and color grading to balance atmosphere and visual harmony.

Each of these refinements brings the project one step closer to achieving the calm and poetic aesthetic I aim for.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1V31Kk4KofnKewaiwoD84rhmC-GjyHAaW/view?usp=sharing

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